Sunday 29 March 2015

The Adept Chronicles - Chapter One - Jerrian.

“To catch a rat, you need an elaborate trap, riddled with incentives. 
To catch a priest, you just need a good argument.”
Old Arossi proverb.

Chapter One.

“This is a good plan, Jerrian” Makar said. “It’ll be fun to watch, too. Especially your part!”

Jerrian glanced sideways at his friend, and shook his head ruefully. Makar was small for his age – he had seen nineteen summers, yet for all of that he still seemed but a child rather than his elder by over a year. His black hair was slicked to his forehead from the incessant heat, but his mouth was set in a manic grin. Dark brown eyes sparkled with anticipation as he gazed out from their concealed rooftop hiding place, onto the baking street below. The walkways of the Aros city markets were jammed with people, even at this early hour. Hawkers and merchants cried their wares, children danced nimbly through the throngs after their parents and peasants and nobles alike were out for a mid-morning stroll. Every now and again Jerrian’s eyes would snag on a blue robed priest of Torra moving in their own bubble of calm, folk of all ranks stepping respectfully aside, before closing in once more.

“Ikean’s tits, it’s hot though, isn’t it?” Makar burst out. “Awful day to be wearing leather. I’d trade two dozen whores and a bottle of plum cider for a bit of rain about now.” He absently scrubbed at his forehead, as sweat trickled down his nut brown skin.

Jerrian chuckled to himself quietly, once again surprised at Makar’s lack of a filter. He said whatever came into his head, without thought for consequence or opinion. By rights, he should have been one of the worst initiates in the Temple. He whored, he drank, he swore constantly and he disappeared from the Temple grounds for days on end, always returning with an unbelievable tale to tell. Yet somehow he remained high in the good graces of the Priesthood. Jerrian applied himself to his studies with a single minded ferocity, yet he could never match his friends’ achievements. What came easily to Makar, Jerrian had to fight tooth and nail for. He was hoping to earn a surname this year before his eighteenth birthmonth, yet he was worried that he would fail the trials and be forced to wait until the following autumn. Makar – who was already known throughout the Temple district and surrounding villages as Lightfingers – had passed his own trials with ease just over a year ago.

Shaking his head to dispel his thoughts, Jerrian gazed down on the bustling market place and considered the plan ahead. It had taken seven days of surveillance, observation and one inspired idea –which he was still not sure would work - to reach this point. Their target was a well-guarded merchant stall situated in a medium sized oval plaza directly below. The walkways and crisscrossing streets, avenues and alleys made a vast tangled web connecting each plaza to another. There was the Great Eastern food market, where caravans from Makran, Cian and as far away as Proctor brought their horrifically spicy wares for sale. At The North Eastern Military Market – which was by far the most heavily guarded – you could buy good Salen steel and Kordovian armour - if you had the funds. Such luxuries were not cheap and tended to be reserved for the nobility and their household soldiers. However, it was the smallest, most unassuming market that interested Jerrian the most.

Situated in the very centre of the complex, the Market of Trillam held a perverse fascination for Jerrian. Trillam was the only City in the world that was able to directly trade with its wondrous neighbour to the West, Rakatan. When he had been a boy, he had harboured dreams of one day joining the legendary Adepts of Rakatan. He would have been a Healer, of course, marked out by his lightning blue eyes and free to travel Dekar helping the common folk and performing wonders. Yet, the Years of Awakening had come and gone. Jerrian’s eyes had remained the same light grey they had always been, and no unnatural occurrences had ever marked him as different. That same year, his parents had given him up to the care of the local Sanctuary of Torra – being the youngest son - and he had eventually found his way to the main Temple in Cleval. Jerrian’s disappointment had been great, but he strongly believed in making the best of a situation. A Priest of Torra was considered a respectable pursuit for a young man and there was plenty of chance to see the world.

Ordinarily, Jerrian considered himself to be fairly law-abiding – at least in comparison to Makar. However, an overheard conversation between two of his tutors the previous week had snagged his curiosity enough to force him to break the rules. It was not every day an opportunity to get your hands on two bottles of Dream Serum came along.

“You remember what it is we’re looking for, Makar?” Jerrian said. “Once the guards are distracted, the whole thing is in your hands. I won’t be able to help you.”

Makar barked a laugh and rubbed his hands together with glee. “You worry too much, Jer. I’ve always said so” He remarked lightly. “Two red crystal vials, both sealed with white wax stoppers. You just leave it to me. They would see your lumbering frame coming a mile off”

He smiled over at his friend to take the sting from his words, yet they were true enough. Despite being over a year younger, Jerrian was almost six feet tall and a full foot taller than Makar - and well-built to boot. His blonde hair and fair complexion made him stand out in a Southern city like Aros, where almost all the locals were black haired and dark.

Jerrian took a few deep, calming breaths and glanced up at the position of the sun. It was nearing midday, almost time. He rose from his crouch and began to critically check his attire. He wore a turquoise silk waistcoat, over a yellow and white striped vest – also silk. His red trousers and soft leather sandals completed the garish outfit. His unruly blonde hair had been slicked back with scented oils and fastened at the nape of his neck with a fine ivory broach. He was the very image of a self-important young man from the insatiable pleasure houses of Aros. He felt horribly conspicuous. He just hoped it was a convincing enough disguise to fool four guards and a merchant. Makar had stolen most of the outfit, yet the broach was Jerrian’s own – a parting gift from his elder sister, Kaya. He wondered idly what she would think of him if she could see him now.

Probably make some jest I wouldn’t understand, before laughing at me and running off he thought sourly.

“You look fine, Jer, believe me. I’ve spent plenty of fun filled hours in those houses to know what the boys look like – although my tastes are completely different, you understand” He finished with a laugh, flowing to his feet and dusting off the red soil on his trousers. He was clad entirely in drab tan coloured, tight fitting leather, perfectly designed to fade into the dull brown brick walls of the city. Makar was quick, and this plan relied heavily on his speed and Jerrian’s barely passable acting skills.

Taking a last deep breath, Jerrian looked across at his friend.

“Okay then, let’s go. Meet you at the top of the abandoned tower in the Faith District in just over an hour”

It was going to be an interesting afternoon, indeed.


Thirty minutes later Jerrian found himself walking confidently along the cramped walkway towards the Trillam Market. A slight bubble of space surrounded him as he walked, with people on all sides drawing out of his way with faintly disapproving expressions on their faces. He had expected it, yet it was harder than he thought to control his temper. Prejudice. It was everywhere, regardless of which village, city or province you came from. During his stints surveying the routines of the merchant and his guards, Jerrian had seen such reactions first hand. Two women – clearly whores, yet also clearly only interested in each other – had been driven away by the merchant and his hired thugs. Yet only after both had rebuffed advances from the oily man behind the stall.

It was this behaviour that had given him his idea. An idea that could potentially backfire and see him seriously hurt. Aros was a wonderful city, culturally diverse where people far and wide gathered. Yet for all of that, it still held some alarming blind spots. The thought that he was actively encouraging people to be openly angry with him made him more than a little nervous, yet the risk was worth it, he hoped. Dream Serum… Jerrian kept the prize firmly at the front of his mind and ignored the contemptuous glances from passers-by.

Fifty paces away, the walkway spilled out into the oval complex. Stalls lined the perimeter, filled to bursting with fine wines, fruits, medicines and other delicacies that could only be obtained from Trillam. The smells assaulted his nostrils, and his stomach rumbled uncomfortably, reminding him that he had only had a half bowl of porridge that morning. Yet it was the centre that interested Jerrian, no matter how tempted to stop for some food he might be. He could see the brightly coloured stall, awash in red and blue velvets directly ahead.

Summoning his courage, Jerrian broke free of the crowded walkway and stepped out into the plaza. He was about twenty paces away, when suddenly he was roughly jostled off balance by a passing peasant. The man had a face like an anvil, a completely bald head and was twice again as wide as Jerrian. Reflexively, he turned around to apologise to the man - even though it was not his fault – and received a face full of spit for his trouble.

“Have tha’ yer dirty lil’ swallower, yer” The man growled threateningly, leaning menacingly towards him. His breath held the rancid taint of days old garlic, and the slight slur to his speech told him that he had had more than his fair share of ale that morning.

Calmly – though inside he was seething – Jerrian removed a white cloth from the breast pocket of his waistcoat, and carefully wiped his face. All the time, his grey eyes never left the other man’s pockmarked face. He noted how he slumped slightly to one side, and how his piggy little eyes squinted at him unsteadily. He was well past tipsy and far further into the reaches of drunkenness than he’d thought. One of the first things you were taught at the Temple of Torra, was how to deal with angry and unreasonable people. Faith and the trappings of religion were not for everyone, and although Cleval may be the home of both the Temples of Torra and Ikean, outside the country matters were often very different.

Jerrian casually finished wiping his face, before deliberately folding up the cloth and placing it back inside his breast pocket. Hitching a pleasant smile onto his face with difficultly, he took one step backwards – moving himself out of arms reach – before slowly raising both hands in a placating gesture.

“My apologies, Goodman, if I have given any offence. I assure you it was not my intention” He said soothingly, instinctively slipping into his Temple idiom. It was a form of speech the priesthood specifically used when faced with often hostile and aggressive civilians. It had better work on this bloody ale filled swine, he thought.

The man frowned suspiciously at him, and looked him up and down disdainfully. Jerrian watched as his face began to redden furiously, and realised too late he had made a mistake. He groaned inwardly as the man’s hands curled into fists, and he took two aggressive steps forward, thrusting his chin into his face.

“Think yer better tha’ me, do yer? Eh? Eh?” He growled. “Think yer can get away with’ talkin’ to me like one of Torra’s own? Yer, who fucks men and then dares to wander this holy city, bold as yer like? Nah, not if I ‘ave anythin’ to say abou’ it!”

The man’s stench was overpowering. Jerrian found himself reflexively gagging. He caught a faint whiff of excrement and hurriedly smoothed the expression of disgust from his face. He could think of no way out of this situation without it ending in violence. It also severely ruined his plans for the Dream Serum now that he was caught up in a confrontation. Frantically, he cast around the plaza for a friendly face. Every eye he caught, a smug, satisfied expression gazed back at him. The Market had come to a standstill, merchants and buyers alike had all turned to watch the exchange, their eyes alight with curiosity. Jerrian took another hasty step back and caught his heel on a loose rock in the dirt. He went sprawling backwards, arms wind milling, and landed with a thump as the plaza erupted in laughter around him.

Red in the face with embarrassment, Jerrian scrambled to his feet. Vainly he tried to beat the dust from his clothes as the odious man in front of him gasped and choked in malicious glee. The aggressive tension had evaporated and Jerrian managed a weak smile, silently relieved that he appeared to have avoided getting into a fight. He gave the fellow a rather shaky bow, before turning and unsteadily striding off in the direction of the opposite walkway. He would have to rethink his plan and maybe revisit it tomorrow.

He had only taken a dozen steps before something soft and heavy hit him in the back of the head with a splat. He lurched forwards, just managing to catch his balance, as the laughter erupted around him once more, louder than before. Reaching behind to feel the back of his head, he felt the sticky remnants of some kind of fruit clinging to his hair. Cursing to himself, he turned round to see the man who had jostled him off balance standing casually near a fruit stall, nonchalantly tossing another dwarf melon from hand to hand. The owner of the stall did not seem to mind in the slightest that her wares were being used for target practice. Instead, her eyes darted back and forth between Jerrian and the man, as if she were watching a show.

“Didn’ say yer could leave, filth.” He hollered. “Nobody insults tha Holy city and gets t’ walk free” One the last word, he launched the melon in his hand. Jerrian twisted to the side as the green and white globe soared past him to land with a splat a few paces away. Shaking his head, he turned away once more. Don’t encourage him, he thought. Don’t lose your temper!

The atmosphere around the plaza had regained its aggressive edge, and Jerrian could feel the tension mounting as he hurriedly picked up his pace. He passed the market stall where the merchant from Trillam and his guards watched passively. The merchant sneered as Jerrian walked past, before turning his head to spit in the dust. As he neared the opposite walkway, the jeering voice called out to him once more, this time making him slam to a halt.
“This your pretty lil’ trinket, girly?” The oaf called, his tone oozing false concern.

Jerrian turned slowly on the spot, his temper rising. The fool stood ten paces away, holding aloft his sister’s broach. It must have been dislodged from his hair when the first globe of fruit had hit him. The white ivory glinted in the sun and Jerrian felt a hot flush pass through his body as the man gloated over his prize. Without realising what he was doing, he began to slowly advance towards him. His hands curled up into fists and the crowd grew suddenly silent as they felt the mood subtly change.

The old fool did not notice a thing, as he continued to examine the broach in his hands, his back to Jerrian. White ivory was rare and expensive, a man like him would never hope to own such a piece in his lifetime. Jerrian could understand the fascination, but that did not stop him. His temper had boiled over, and rage blinded him. Reaching the fellow, he grabbed him by the shoulder, jerking him round. The man turned with a grunt of surprise, the corners of his mouth beginning to turn up in a scowl before Jerrian’s left fist crashed straight into his face with the force of a hammer hitting a nail. He felt rotted teeth break beneath his fist, as the man reeled backwards with a cry, landing with a crash in the dirt. Striding forwards, Jerrian placed a boot on his chest as he tried to rise, and slammed him back onto the ground, pinning him in place. A swift kick to the midriff made him curl up with a groan, the broach dropping from his hand as he protected his stomach. Jerrian’s hand darted out to retrieve the broach, before turning away once more. He had tried to be civil and it had not worked. He had tried to walk away, and had been forced to react.

It seemed he was made to find trouble.

Without a backwards glance, he marched past the suddenly silent and dispersing crowd, straight past the merchant guards and their stall, who were all holding their spears in readiness, and out into the market circuit. People hurriedly moved out of his way after a quick look at his face, and he disappeared into the crowds. A glance at the sun told him his hour was long up, and he would have no chance of coming back another day now. He could try a dozen different disguises, but he would always be recognised after today’s exploits. Dream Serum was a rare and precious thing – something he had longed to own for years. Yet the ivory broach of his favourite sister was irreplaceable.

Foolish bloody oaf he thought angrily. He was not sure if he meant the pitiful wretch groaning in agony far behind him, or himself.


Gazing out restlessly from the top of the broken tower in the Faith District, Makar started to worry about Jerrian. The window of time for their plan was long over, yet he had still not returned. He felt a little guilty at leaving him to the mercy of that wallowing ale bag, but what else was he to have done? Jerrian was more than capable of taking care of himself, and Makar was little use in a fist fight. The plan had been for Jerrian to insult the merchant and his guardsmen by pretending to be a recruiter from the pleasure houses intent on hiring them. The merchant and his men would have been distracted and angry, their vigilance relaxed. In all likelihood, they would have chased Jerrian out of the plaza – which was what they were banking on. That was when Makar would slip into the canopy behind the stall and take the two bottles of Dream Serum. Jer was needlessly worried about being hurt during their sham – Makar had never known anyone to run as fast as he could. Add in the heavy armour and unwieldy weaponry of the guardsmen, and Jerrian would be as good as out of their sight at the first hint of a threat. He just hoped his temper had not gotten the better of him again…

Snorting to himself, Makar choked back a laugh. Jer and his troublesome temper. Makar had seen time and again Jerrian fail to control his anger in various different situations. He was too serious, he needed to learn to enjoy life. Instead, he worked himself up by letting the world and its problems affect him. Makar preferred to breeze through life, never caring and never worrying about what people thought of him, or where life would take him. Jer couldn’t do that. He needed reasons for the things he did and he was always trying to question and understand concepts that made Makar’s head hurt. Still, being around him was never dull. Trouble seemed to find Jerrian more often than Makar found a soft breast.

Looking out across the square towards the streets heading back into the city, Makar suddenly spotted a tall blonde haired figure striding purposefully down the empty road on the far side of the square. The flamboyant clothing and familiar tread made Makar laugh out loud with relief. Finally.


A low whistle made Jerrian lift his head and look up to the top of the abandoned tower ahead. A small silhouette outlined against the white stone walls gave him a quick wave before disappearing back inside the belfry. Still muttering to himself, he swept the deserted square with a critical eye before breaking into a jog to reach the shadowed archway ahead. Passing through the rusted doorway – taking care to ensure he closed it carefully behind him – he crossed a small entrance hall and walked hurriedly up the pitted marble steps to the summit. Situated in the middle of the landing was a large silver bell that had often been used to signal the morning devotions. To the right of this, a door led out onto the balcony overlooking the square. Despite the heat outside, Jerrian could make out a fire at the opposite end of the room where Makar casually reclined against the stone walls. Light poured in from two chipped stained glass windows, depicting the Lord and Lady; Torra and Ikean. Loosening his waistcoat, he stomped round the bell and threw himself down beside his friend. His temper had evaporated from earlier, and in its place was left a feeling of bitter disappointment.

“Well…that went well, didn’t it?” Remarked Makar with a laugh.

Disgustedly, Jerrian reached across and thumped his friend on the shoulder, before leaning back against the wall and closing his eyes. “I was expecting difficult, Makar. I was prepared for difficult and almost anything those guards could have thrown at me, but a random passer in the street? There’s no planning for that” He sighed.

“What happened?” Makar asked quietly.

Jerrian opened one eye and looked across at his friend. “Didn’t you see that part, then? He wouldn’t leave off. I knew it was risky wearing this outfit, but seriously, I wasn’t expecting that. I think I could have still made something of the situation, but then he got hold of Kaya’s broach and I…snapped – hey, give it a rest will you!” He said as Makar burst out laughing.”  I had to get out of there, quick. Well, maybe there will be another chance before we have to go back to the Temple.” He finished doubtfully.

Struggling to control himself, Makar fended off another blow to the shoulder as Jerrian growled at him to be quiet. Making a soothing gesture, he stumbled to his feet and walked over to a dim corner of the room, retrieving a neatly tied bundle from a bench against the wall. Walking back to Jerrian he threw him the package before taking a seat once more.

“Your regular clothes are in there” He said, still chuckling. “It’s probably best you change in here before we go back out into the city. Also, there’s a bucket of fresh water that I drew from one of the wells in that corner, along with some soap. I’d make good use of it, if I were you. You stink. Did he try and hug you or something? And what’s in your hair, fruit?”

Grumbling, Jerrian dragged himself to his feet and started to peel off the fruit and dust stained clothing, piling it on the floor beside him. Rummaging through his old bundle of clothes, he pulled on a set of soft leather breeches before making his way over to the bucket and soap. The water was ice cold and he gasped and spluttered as he washed his head, neck and torso before walking back and using the yellow and white vest to dry off. Shrugging into a loose grey shirt, he sat back down next to Makar with a sigh.

“So, that Dream Serum” said Makar. “You never did tell me why you wanted it. What is it?”

Jerrian turned to stare incredulously at his friend “You’ve never heard of it before? You need to come out of the brothels once in a while, Mak, maybe you’d learn something”

“Well maybe you need to go into the brothels once in a while Jer. I bet you would learn something too!” Makar laughed, with a wink. “Seriously though, you know I don’t go in for all this unnatural stuff. That’s your fantasy, not mine.”

“I suppose it doesn’t matter now, does it” Jerrian sighed. “I think that was my one chance to get my hands on a bottle…that Deren cursed peasant!” He swore suddenly. “Why couldn’t he have just left me alone? He ruined the plan, and I lost my temper. Again.”

He fell silent and closed his eyes once more. Makar stretched languorously and cast his friend a sly look before casually announcing “Well, if you aren’t going to tell me why we went to all that trouble, I suppose I should take these two bottles back to that slimy merchant with our apologies.” With a grin he reached into the small black bag next to him and removed two red vials, filled to the brim with a colourless, swirling liquid. Two white wax plugs secured the contents as Makar held them up to the light streaming through the nearby window.

Jerrian’s eyes snapped open and he let out a yell of shock as he stared at the two bottles in Makar’s hands.

“Torra’s bollocks, how did you get – b-but I thought t-that I’d ruined everything!” He spluttered.

Makar frowned, leaning over to carefully place the two bottles in Jerrian’s trembling hands.

“Ruined everything? Jer, I don’t think it could actually have gone better. Every single eye was on you and that bloated sack of wine. Every. Single. Eye! Honestly, it was the easiest thing to sneak behind that stall and find these. I thought about it and I’m convinced if we had managed to pull off the original idea and caused some kind of scuffle, I would have been seen for sure. We were gambling on all the guards chasing you, but there was no guarantee that they would. This worked out better – though you losing your temper again was a nice bonus. You’re so serious, Jer” He said, with a shake of his head.

Sitting there in stunned disbelief, Jerrian could do little more than grunt in acknowledgement of Makar’s last comment. He stared in awe at the two small bottles, barely three inches in height, feeling a warm glow of excitement rush through his body. It was hard to believe he held in his hands the potion of Rakatan. A slow, satisfied grin spread across his face as he looked up at Makar, who was studying him with a faintly amused expression.

“This is amazing, Mak. You really are the best. Do you want the second bottle?” Jerrian offered.

Makar did not even hesitate before shaking his head, and Jerrian understood. Trickster, liar and a thief he might be, but Jerrian had never shown any interest in anything remotely out of the ordinary. He loved his life in the Temple and to him, the only way he would leave the country of Cleval was if he were forced to.

“They’re not for me, Jer” Makar said, leaning across and gently tracing the swirling contours of a bottle. “Although, I would still like to know why we went to so much trouble for them. They were locked up tight, in a very expensive looking strongbox, so they must be rare. Are you going to sell them?”

“Sell them?” Jerrian laughed incredulously. “No, I’m definitely not selling them! I’m going to use them – well, one of them anyway. The tales all say that if an ordinary person drinks Dream Serum, then they will become an Adept – without being born one. I’m going to have to ask some very subtle questions when we get back to the Temple. I’m sure one of the Arch-Priests will have knowledge I can use.”

Carefully, Jerrian handed the vials back to Makar to wrap and place back in the bag beside him. Makar, however, sat there staring at them with a faint look of distaste. Abruptly, he stood and walked over to the door leading out on to the balcony. Slightly confused, Jerrian watched as his friend turned to him, a look of resolve on his usually relaxed features.

“I should throw these off the tower, Jer.” He said quietly.

“What? No! Why would you do that?” Cried Jerrian.

“Why!? Haven’t you just listened to yourself?” He shouted angrily, his face turning red. “Adepts are born not made! I know enough about their ways to know it wouldn’t be by drinking some strange looking liquid in a fancy bottle! I’d be doing you a favour. What if those so called tales you heard were wrong? I’ve never heard anything like that before. What if this stuff poisoned you, or-or-or even killed you? Or your cock shrivelled up and fell off? Did you ever think of that? For someone usually so serious, you really do let your good sense fly out of the window when it comes to those cursed Adepts. You have to let those childish dreams go, Jer. You’re not a kid anymore.”

Jerrian stood there stunned as Makar’s tirade washed over him. The older boy had one hand on the brass ring that secured the door to a bolt on the wall, but he had not yet made a move to open it.

I can still stop him he thought, frantically. I can still get those bottles back.

I didn’t know he cared so much another part of him thought, with surprise.

He took a tentative step forwards, and Makar tensed, ready to fling open the door and rush out onto the balcony. He would do it, too, Jerrian knew. Makar never made empty promises to his friends.

It took a lot of nerve for Jerrian to stop, and walk back towards the fire and sit down. He looked over at his friend and saw he hadn’t yet made a move to go outside. Tiredly, he leaned his head back against the wall with a sigh.

“I won’t try and stop you, Mak” He said sadly. “I know you mean well, but this a lifelong dream of mine. How about a compromise? I promise I won’t use the bottles until I’m absolutely sure I know what they do.” He raised his voice as Makar opened his mouth to object. “- Also, you can keep hold of the bottles, until I know for sure. As long as you promise me you won’t break them. Give me a month to find out. Just one month. Please?”

Jerrian held his breath as he watched his friend slowly close his mouth, swallowing whatever he had been about to say. He gazed thoughtfully at Jerrian, his head cocked slightly to one side.

“One month?” He asked, his dark eyes never leaving Jerrian’s.

“One month” Jerrian replied seriously, nodding. “On Kaya’s life, I swear it.”

“Bah! You don’t have to do that.” Makar said disgustedly, finally taking his hand from the latch and walking back to Jerrian’s side. “You said one month and I trust you. One month it is. I just hope you know what you’re doing.” He finished warningly.

Jerrian stared into the embers of the slowly dying fire, feeling a tiredness he hadn’t known existed settle into his muscles.


I hope I do too, Mak. He thought with a shiver. 

Monday 23 March 2015

Prologue - The Adept Chronicles.

Prologue

The smell of blood and death hung heavy in the air as Markos slowly recovered consciousness. With a groan he strained to lift his head from the stone wall he was slumped against, setting off a jolt of pain in the muscles of his left arm. A moan escaped him, as he groggily gazed around the confines of the tiny cell. The single torch set in a bracket on the wall cast a dim red glare over flagstones piled with filth and refuse. Where was he? What was he doing here? This surely was not Rakatan. His last coherent memory was of riding along a river, with mountains in the distance and the stars overhead.

Vague images floated through his mind as he struggled to remember why he had blacked out. With his right hand he gingerly felt at an egg sized lump on the back of his head. That explained his lack of consciousness. A woman’s cackling laughter and the memory of blinding pain were all the clues he had to go on as he slowly and painfully manoeuvred himself into a sitting position. Breathing heavily from the exertion, Markos squinted into the dim corners of the cell. There was something wrong with his eyes. He felt the first flickers of panic as he desperately tried to focus on his surroundings. The only sound he could hear was the steady drip drip of water hitting stone.

Suddenly a scream shattered the darkness followed by a woman pleading shrilly, her frantic cries echoing off the stone walls. “No! Please, no! I c…c…cannot take anymore. Please don’t make me, pleaaa -“

Her cries cut off in a strangled gurgle, followed by a tearing and ripping sound. Markos felt a surge of fear pass through his body as horror engulfed him. Breathing raggedly, he hesitantly dragged himself into a crouching position, before slowly leaning towards the iron bars he could vaguely make out a few paces in front of him. As he shifted his weight to place his left hand flat on the flagstones, the arm gave a lurching spasm casting him face first onto the stone floor. White light bloomed behind his eye lids and a shattering pain made him cry out. The warm tang of blood cascaded from a broken nose and into his mouth, pooling on the floor beneath him.

Gritting his teeth and struggling to breathe, Markos ponderously lifted himself back into a sitting position. Through fog clouded eyes and a sheen of red, he cautiously used his right hand to tug back the grime caked robe on his left arm. The once bright white linen was stained with blood and excrement, making it stiff as he carefully peeled it back. His arm was throbbing in counter point to the pain in his nose. What he saw made him clench his jaw to keep in a scream of hysteria.

Criss-crossing back and forth along his forearm were knife deep wounds. Each cut surgically precise and following the line of muscle. Lifting a trembling finger, Marcos traced the cauterised flesh and felt the bile rise at the back of his throat. Frantically he dragged the robe higher, and stared numbly at the mangled mess of his upper arm.

From the shoulder down to the joint of the elbow, were teeth marks. Huge lacerations and punctures from a mouth made for tearing. Just below the shoulder, the flesh oozed yellow pus from a vicious tear that exposed the muscle through to the bone. Markos vomited noisily onto the cell floor, retching and gasping as he desperately tried to summon memories of what had happened. His brain felt as if it were in a fog, each of his thoughts floating up and slipping through mental fingers before he could pin them down with anything substantial. He raggedly scrubbed at his mouth with the sleeve of his right arm, pushing through a tangle of coarse black beard. He stared in shock at the remains of an arm that had once conjured wonders out of nothing, yet was now twisted in a mere mockery of flesh.

“Ah, you are awake. How…fortunate for you, Markos Kellyn.” Said a female voice.

Markos jerked his head up, startled. Wincing at the pain in his arm he squinted into the darkness. Just beyond the sputtering light of the torch, he could make out the silhouette of a tall, painfully thin woman. Out of the corner of his eye, he caught movement in the shadows behind the figure. There was a low hiss and a rustling sound that made his skin crawl.

“Who are you?” He rasped. “Who is that behind you?”

For a few moments, the woman made no response. Then slowly, she stepped forward into the circle of light, throwing her features into hard relief. She was an old woman, yet not unlovely. Handsome, yet with a stern face that Markos thought had a cruel cast to it. Her face was framed by close cropped brown hair, which was just beginning to show wings of grey at the temples. She was dressed simply in a brown woollen robe. Her dark, poisonous green eyes gazed impassively at the man slumped on the floor before her.

Markos drew in a sharp breath and said hoarsely “Those eyes…how can you have those eyes? What has happened to – “

“Enough!” Interrupted the woman, softly. “All the questions shall be mine, Markos Kellyn. Perhaps if you comply with my reasonable requests, I shall answer you. Yet for now, have you come to a decision? You have had many days to think of a suitable answer. I warn you once more of the dangers of denying me – just take another look at your arm, if you should need more proof. The Adepts are no longer as sacrosanct as you have been led to believe. Well? Answer me! Will you join my – our – cause willingly?”

For a few moments Markos sat stunned and confused. His memories were still shrouded and foggy, yet the woman’s words had triggered a horrible scene to unfold in his mind. It felt like the shadow of a dream, yet he knew it for truth.

“You had some…thing…eat me.” He croaked “I r-r-remember the pain. I remember a scared looking boy with a silver knife cutting me because you told him to! I remember all that. Yet I do not remember what you want with me, or why I am here. I am an Adept of the Makers, something I know you are aware of. Release me!”

Again, the woman simply stared at him, expressionless. She raised one finger and thoughtfully pressed it to her lips, as she considered the decrepit man before her.

“Hmm, perhaps you speak the truth. Or perhaps not. I am not unaware of the training the Adepts must undergo to function within the wide world. It is a testament to your desire for survival that you have even made it this far. Many others have not” Her pale lips quirked up into a humourless smile, before continuing. “Yet, my time is precious. Ironically, so is yours, but for entirely different reasons, so I will give you one last opportunity to weigh your choices. I need your powers. Specifically, the powers of a Maker. You live to create, yes? You live to improve and expand upon all that you see and revel in the very essence of nature. I understand it. I too once felt such a pull. The thrill of creation, the simple joy that comes from the total spiritual harmony with everything on Ikean’s green earth. Yet now, no longer. My passions and skills have been turned towards nobler ideals. This is why I need you, Markos Kellyn. Look, and remember”

She gestured absently behind her as a huge, hulking shadow stepped forward out of the darkness. Markos choked back a cry, his eyes bulging as he took in the apparition. He scrambled hastily backwards, colliding hard against the stone wall of the cell. It was over six feet tall with large, acid yellow eyes set in a squashed face. Its skin was leathery and a dull greenish brown, but it was the teeth that Markos found himself staring at. Two rows of sharp, vicious looking canines gleamed wetly in the faint light of the torch. His mangled arm itched as he gazed with revulsion on the creature that he knew had been eating at his flesh.

His throat felt constricted, his breathing hoarse as he gasped out a curse. “Torra’s eyes, what is that?” The things gaze never wavered as it hungrily stared at him. For the first time Markos noticed another oddity. It was garbed in what appeared to be a leather weapons harness, expertly made to fit its cumbersome frame. All the holders were currently empty, but the implication was not lost on him. This was a creature bred for fighting.

The woman’s voice forced him to drag his attention away from the creature. He did not like taking his eyes from it, but he had to try and focus. Learn what you can he thought.

“Is it not marvellous?” she purred. For the first time Markos saw something close to affection flit across her harsh features as she looked at the monstrosity.

“You would not believe the power I have had to expend during my experiments.” She whispered. “The sheer force left me physically drained for days, and yet only two survived my testing. Fortunately, a female and a male – this one here, in fact. Once I recovered, I had just enough reserves left in me to start on newer, more challenging tasks. This is what I need from you, Markos Kellyn. An army of creatures, totally subservient to my will. I have old scores that must be settled, and you will help me. Do you accept?”

Her sudden question jarred him out of his stupor. He laughed in disbelief, his voice cracking as his head swung from one set of poisonous eyes to the other. The creature tensed slightly as the sound echoed off the walls and faded into the distance.

“You want me to help you with this? Never.” He said, gaining control of himself. “It is an abomination and has no place on Dekar. Yet I think I now know who you are, lady. Who else would be arrogant enough to assume they could twist the natural order of life itself but the broken wife of Adeptus De – “

“Silence!” She shrieked. Markos cut off, suddenly afraid, as the woman gripped the iron bars intently. Her face had momentarily twisted in grief, yet her eyes burned with hatred.

“You will not speak that name!” She spat. “You will not sully my presence with your foul, deceitful words. It seems I have your answer, so I have no more need of you or your lies. Farewell Markos Kellyn.”

With that, she reached into her robes and withdrew a large, rusted key. She turned the key in the lock with a screech, before swinging the cell door wide. She gave Markos one last lingering look, before turning on her heel and striding off into the darkness.

Terror clutched at Markos and he desperately tried to engage his power as the creature slowly stepped across the portal, mouth opening wide. Frantically, he shouted at the woman’s retreating back “If I die here, the Anarchist’s will rise! They will find you and they will lay waste to all your plans!”

He heard the receding footsteps stop, and dared to hope. The monster instinctively came to a halt and twisted its ugly head to stare back towards its mistress.

For a dozen heartbeats, Markos held his breath, and then her voice floated out of the shadows.

“They are welcome to try”

The footsteps began again, and the creature turned back to Markos. With hungry delight in its eyes it sprang at him, jaws gaping and blood dripping red from its maw.


He never had the chance to scream. 

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She sat with her head bowed and her arms wrapped around her knees, as if she was trying – and failing – to draw in on herself. Her breath came in ragged gasps, and she trembled as if cold, though it was the height of summer. Pain wracked her mind in stabbing convulsions, yet still she remained on the ground, trying to deny what had happened.

For fifty paces in each direction, devastation reigned. Barely minutes earlier there had been three wagons, each carrying a different load. Wool, spices, books, foodstuffs, equipment, hay and more besides– all the essentials and necessities you would associate with merchant wagons on their way to a market fair. Yet now those same things were strewn across the hard packed earthen road. Books were torn and ripped, barrels upended or rent apart. All the priceless things the girl’s family had taken pains to bring so far for sale lay scattered like so much dross.

Yet to her, this was not the worst of it. More spasms wracked through her body and she cried aloud. Her throat already felt raw from sobbing and screaming. When would it end? She could not care enough to wonder at the answer, yet she hoped it was soon. The pain was reaching a crescendo. It had never been this bad before, and in so many ways it would never be this bad again.

Dimly, as if from a distance, she heard the scrape of a boot on wood. She wanted to look up, but if she did she would see again. As long as she lived she would never be able to banish those images. Her Mother crying out frantically, her Father roaring in pain. Her brother’s terror filled eyes would haunt her dreams forever.

In between her racking sobs, she heard the sound of footsteps coming closer. A measured pace slow and sure. Occasionally they would stop, and she knew that whoever this person was they were looking at what she refused to see. The footsteps continued until she felt someone standing beside her. Out of nowhere a hand settled on her left shoulder and she flinched away crying out. She was not ready for human contact. She felt soiled, dirty.

“Peace, I am sorry lass.” Said a man’s voice. “It has been a long time since I last saw something like this. I had forgotten… I mean you no harm, I swear it. I am here to help you.”

The man’s voice acted as a balm to her raw nerves. Involuntarily she lifted her head and looked up through glistening lashes right into the bluest pair of eyes she had ever seen. The man himself was old, though hale. A tanned, weather beaten face that was currently set into an expression of utmost empathy. She recoiled from that look as if it were a viper rearing up to strike. She did not deserve such compassion. Ducking her head back between her knees she mumbled “You can’t help me. Nobody can help me… LOOK WHAT I’VE DONE!”

These last words exploded out in a shriek of despair.

The old man gave a deep sigh, and turned his back on the shaking young girl to survey the scene before him.

You could call it a perfect circle, if you were so inclined. A perfect circle of death, with the girl at the centre of the storm. The man had seen such ferocity before, but this… Torra have mercy he thought, sadly.

For fifty paces amidst all the heaped supplies and smashed belongings that would never now be sold, there were bodies. The nearest – a woman – was leaning gently against the bole of a tree just off the dirt track road, almost as if she had decided to rest from the unbearable heat in the shade of the leafy canopy. She could have been resting, if her head had been facing the right way. It was as if a pair of hands had gripped her by the ears - and with unnatural force - had twisted it round to face the opposite direction.

Yet you could be forgiven for calling that end lucky. As the old man’s eyes travelled onwards, his gaze snagged on arms ripped from torsos, legs shredded and bloodied almost beyond recognition. Amidst the wreckage of one of the carts, a huge barrel of a man lay half hanging off the driver’s seat – headless. A quick search found the missing head, thirty yards from the body. Children, some small, some nearing maturity, had not been spared either. Truly, a circle of destruction, and all caused by the stick thin slip of a girl sobbing behind him. The old man sighed again and turned back to the girl.

“I have seen, my dear. Terra knows how I have seen. Yet this is not the first time I have been witness to such destruction, even if it is the first under such circumstances. You must come with me now, I fear. You are in more danger than you could realise. What is your name?”

The girl’s sobbing cut off in a ragged gasp. Go with this old man, who she had only just met? Yes, anything to get away from here she thought. Anything that meant she could walk away and never have to look back. She did not even care where to, as long as it was away.


“My name is Char” She whispered.

Thursday 19 March 2015

The Wheel of Time Book Review - Eye of the World part one.

I have always found it difficult to pin down my favourite books of all time. Fantasy as a genre has been a constant companion for me over the years, ever since I picked up the fantastic Belgariad Series by David Eddings as a young teenager. Even such literary classics from Roald Dahl and Enid Blyton hold fond memories for me. The Magic Faraway Tree was a group of stories I absolutely loved as a child, and I have since bought for the son of one of my best friends. I hope he'll enjoy reading them in later life. 

Yet, as I have progressed through different styles of fantasy throughout the years, I have come into contact with different Authors. From Tolkien to Pratchett, Robin Hobb to Janny Wurts and George RR Martin, I have been privileged to read some excellent novels and appreciate the skill at its finest. 

Another author that always stood out for me was Robert Jordan, the creator of the Wheel of Time series of books. I still remember the day I bought the very first book in the series, Eye of the World. I was in Waterstones, casually browsing the shelves and I saw the cover. It was one of the horrible Darryl Sweet covers (and fans of the series will know what I mean when I say that) and to this day I am surprised I picked it up. Fantastic artist that Mr Sweet undoubtedly was, he never quite managed to capture the epic scale and grandeur of the Wheel of Time for me. His characters were totally devoid of inspiration and the scenes he chose to depict were so commonplace and out of the ordinary that you often had to struggle to recall which scene they were meant to represent.

Thankfully, however, it was the blurb that sold me. Classic Fantasy. Good Vs Evil, magic systems (possibly, in my opinion, one of the best ever created) and what appeared to be an intriguing list of characters. Only a few others in the series had been written at this point, so I took the plunge and bought the book - and I have honestly never looked back. Barely a week later, after devouring a nearly 800 page novel, I returned and bought the rest. No questions asked. 

Now, as I have decided to give this blog a reboot in the hope that it will further inspire my own creative attempts at writing, I thought it would be a great idea to review some of my favourite series'. So, here it is, in my own devastatingly original style. I was undecided on how to proceed. Should I go chapter by chapter and do a full analytic breakdown such as Cannoli does in his excellent Egwene's Evil efforts on Read and Find Out? I think that would be fun, but I don't quite like the thoughts of getting too deep and to involved that way. Simply, I don't think I have the skills for it. 

So, in the end I have decided to start in a similar fashion to a writer who has posted his own thoughts on groups and forums recently, Drew McCaffrey. Similar, but not a copy (I am hoping). I am going to assume that most of the people I share this with will have read the books. There are spoilers for those who have not, but maybe this will inspire you to read and enjoy too.

So, Eye of the World...

The book opens with possibly one of the best prologues of any Fantasy book I have ever read. It is haunting, tense and mysterious. Lews Therin Telamon, known as The Dragon, is wandering aimlessly around his house calling out for his wife, Ilyena. Only after completing the rest of the series, did I realise just how much was foreshadowed in this one prologue alone. We hear of the True Power from Ishamael, who uses it to cure Lews Therin of his madness. We are given a very clear indication that Ishamael is not trapped like the rest of the Forsaken - due to his very presence here. It is only later we find out about his partial releases at various different points over the years. We see the creation of the Island where Tar Valon will eventually come to be built. It's all excellent stuff from Jordan and gives you just enough mystery to leave you desperate for more. 

Then we move on to the opening chapter, An Empty Road, with the timeless words "The Wheel of Time turns, and Ages come and pass..." I know during my own writing I have always struggled at times when thinking on how to open a book. Robert Jordan from the start set out a perfect means of introducing us to his characters and then showing his readers different parts of the world. It's a fantastic few lines. 

Hey Rand! In my opinion, Rand is one of the best developed fantasy characters I have ever read. The progression in his arc is simply astounding and is a testament to the skills of the author and how the pressures of the world can affect just one person. We're also introduced to Tam al'Thor, Rand's father. Tam is another great character and he typifies that classic 'takes no crap' approach that makes a character relatable. He reminds me a lot of Burrich from Robin Hobb's Farseer books. A no nonsense, competent man that will always get the job done, and get it done right. When Rand later in the series is going through his darker times - and even later in this very book, when he is being haunted by Ishamael in his dreams, I have always believed it is because of Tam that he was able to resist for as long and as successfully as he did. 

I will admit, the first time I read this and I came to the part about the Myrddraal, I immediately thought 'discount Nazgul'. The whole black cloaked rider deal, the clearly creepy horse and the general situation of the meeting screamed it to me. Going through this whole book, there are so many comparisons to Tolkien. Yet rather than put me off, as i know some people found, it only intrigued me the more as Jordan gave it his own twist and added to it. 

As we reach Emond's Field (Hobbiton - again, not a criticism) , we start to see a few minor characters (very minor in some cases) and we get a heavy foreshadowing of the famous Two Rivers stubbornness which is basically the backbone of a lot of RJ's story. The heroes' couldn't have done and achieved what they did without this stubbornness. We get an insight into Tam's character a lot more, too. 

Eventually, we reach the village Inn and meet Bran al'Vere. It is here that we first meet the eventual best character in the series, Mat Cauthon. Throughout the first two books, Mat struggles to assert himself on the story, I feel. Obviously a lot of the plot is driven through his interactions with the dagger and Shadar Logoth, yet I honestly must say that in Eye of the World, my favourite character was Perrin, probably due to his abilities and how unique I found them at the time. Mat was the comic relief for two books, despite his illnesses. I'm just glad that he got out of that funk and started to shine. 

Padan Fain, Moiraine and Lan all arrive. Yay for Moiraine and Lan! Not long after this, though, we're introduced to Egwene. Ahh Egwene. Better virtual pens than mine have described in loving detail just how appalling of a person and character Egwene is. Selfish, vindictive, hypocritical, power hungry, a raving sociopath - the list is endless. I will try and not turn this into a an Egwene hating session, but I would like to point two things out for those who think I only see the bad in her. 

1. On my very first read, Egwene was my second favourite character, behind Mat. It was only after numerous re-reads and Cannoli's dissection that I began my dislike of her. 
2. The way she treats her closest friends, and long term betrothed, is appalling. Also, each one of these friends anticipates and understands her far better than anyone else throughout the series. Rand, Mat, Perrin, Nynaeve - all of them distance themselves from her to a varying degree. I'm always reminded of one of Mat's comments, later in the series. "Egwene has left Emond's Field further behind than the rest of us - and she regrets it the least" This coming from the guy who only ever wanted to see the world, dice, gamble and not 'be a bloody hero'. Quite the damning assessment. 

The Trolloc attack on Rand's farm was the hook for a lot of people, I know. For me, he had me at the prologue. The scene where Rand is dragging his father through the woods is just creepy and so well set up. Tam's fever dreams are mesmerizing and I remember reading them through a few times to try and catch the meanings behind it. 

How awesome is Moiraine's Manetheren speech? It gave me chills just reading it! Also, gives us our first hint about Ishy being free when she speaks of a "Power was in that dread black banner that gave hope to the Shadow". Mentally applauding RJ here. 

We get the hint of Rand's first Channeling of Saidin as the party are fleeing from Emond's Field. The great thing about all this is that in the first book Egwene, to me at least, is there to provide the reader with that parallel of the reactions and symptoms of Channeling so you can spot those same issues cropping up with Rand. That was her only purpose in book one, as she sure as hell did not contribute much else. 

Just realising I have really rambled on here - first review and everything! I will get to Baerlon and leave it there, I think. 

Moiraine sinking the ferry was the very first indication for me that Aes Sedai 'ain't all that nice, really, and what she was willing to sacrifice to the cause. Or the 'Greater Good'. Hightower might have been a bit of an ass, but did he deserve to have his livelihood destroyed to delay being chased? Lan himself said that Hightower would run a mile if he ever came into contact with a Fade. We later find out that the Fade's use the Ways to cross over the Taren anyway, plus the Ferry would never have carried hundreds of Trollocs who are scared of water. It seemed callous and unnecessary  from Moiraine, and you can totally understand the reactions from Rand, Mat and Perrin - and to a lesser extent, Thom - towards her. It's basically vandalism. Egwene of course, does not care. It's Power. She wants it. 

When we reach Baerlon (basically Bree!), we get a lot more information about Logain and I think we also see the very first Ta'veren twisting of the pattern from the three boys in the bath chamber. The attendant says far more than he originally intended to do and his reaction is very much the same to how other characters have reacted later in the series when near Rand, Mat and Perrin. Did anyone else notice this? 

I think I will stop here for now, as it's fairly late and I am supposed to be up early tomorrow. Solar Eclipse, you know! Hopefully you all enjoyed my chattering away, and I will look to post another part in a few days time. Please look through the rest of my stuff and feel free to leave comments and feedback on my own writing! 

Thanks,

CM 



Maps and World Building




As you can see above, I took the arduous task of attempting to create a fictional world for The Adept Chronicles. Now, anyone remotely associated with me should know that I am a terrible, terrible artist. I can stretch to drawing a map, but that is basically it - and I often think that that is pushing it. So, above is my rendition of the continent of Dekar, which may one day become as famous as Middle-Earth, Discworld, Narnia, Westeros/Essos or Randland. That's the dream, right? 

The top drawing is my own and took me bloody ages, as I changed my mind constantly on places, names, paths, layouts etc. The bottom one, however, is from a friend of mine called Natalie Irvine. Wonderful person, cracking artist, and it only took her an hour or so to knock up that brilliant rendition. To be quite honest, I think I prefer her version over mine - it just looks more streamlined, don't you think? 

I'd appreciate a few comments and feedback from independent observers, if any of you could be so kind. Feel free to be as harsh or as praiseworthy as possible. 

CM

Refresh and Restart

For the past week or so I've been playing with the thought of setting up a website - purely for my own writing work and possibly some reviews of my favourite books and so forth. I was inspired in part by Drew McCaffrey's Dcaf Writing page - well worth checking out for those interested in up and coming writers. His page is here http://dcafwriting.com/

So, I had a little look into some of the places that help you do that (WordPress etc) and I've come to the conclusion that I really don't want to pay for the privilege. All the free options on these sites are blogs anyway - which is something I already have and used extensively (if not wisely) during my travels last year. 


So, meet the new and improved Wordplay blog. Gone are all the day to day musings on football (which I'll exclusively leave to my Twitter feed, where it's easily mutable and generally ignored - understandably). 

Gone are the vitriolic musings choc full of bile and anger that so blighted (yet entertained, if the 2000 previous page views are anything to go by) my travels last year. Fresh start, new (same) blog, improved (just deleted) efforts. 

I don't expect anyone to like it. Heck, I don't expect anyone to even pay any iota of attention to it, but that doesn't matter. If even one person enjoys the stuff I throw up on here, then I would say that's worthwhile. 

So, in a nutshell, this is what you shall all be treated to in the coming months and (with luck) years: 

  • New and old chapters from the book I've been attempting to write for the last 12 months. It's called Dekar - The Adept Chronicles. I hope it'll be a best seller one day. 
  • Updates on the progress of publishing, writing styles, observations on different books and authors that I especially enjoy and have found to be influential over the years.
  • Reviews of my favourite books and in depth (sort of) analysis of the Authors and the message they were trying to get across.
And probably a few more things when I think of them.

Now, I know what you're all thinking. How can I possibly contain so much fun and entertainment in three short bullet points? Well, I can't. Don't be silly, I know it sounds dull, but I rather enjoy it and I think I'm actually quite good at writing, so you should always do what you're good at. Or think you're good at, anyway. 

Well, there we are. I will begin uploading new stuff as soon as possible, and then I will go on a relentless spamming/marketing/advertising/harassing (in a nice way, of course, I'm essentially a gentleman) spree to get the Wordplay (har har) out there. 

I hope you enjoy it. I hope I enjoy it, too. 

CM